Herculean Will of Strength

[Gouriki]

Name:
Gouriki Tsunzaku
Profile: Link
Rank Requested: 1
Additions: Better Hand-to-Hand Combat Skillz
Threads: Link

[Shinzu]

Same thing I told Reddo.

This thread won’t really take you to rank 2, even with the double thread event.

Right now you’re on rank 0 so to get to 2 you’ll need three threads, one to get you to rank 1 and two to get you to rank 2.

Though if you want, you can still use it to rank up to rank 1

[Naka]

OK here is what I will do. I will clean up this thread and move it to accepted.

For future reference, the thread you put for rank one is only just good enough for the rank up. Generally we are looking for about 10 posts, less if they are long and good quality, which yours are. However I want you to know its just barely.

However before I accept this, you need to come up with actual additions. "Better skillz" does not cut it.

First of all, with rank one you get +1 Blitzen (since you are a speed non-specialist)
You also get one advent upgrade:

Advent Upgrades
At each rank that they obtain Advent Upgrade, the Advent Human may select one of their preexisting abilities and add to it, making it more powerful or extensive in scope, improving on the power of each of their abilities.

So look at the power you have and see how you could improve it as stated. Then describe out the improvement for approval.

[Gouriki]

So am I rank 2 or three?

[Naka]

OK lets see if I can make this clear.

First and foremost:

Dec 2, 2010 0:19:03 GMT 1 Gouriki said:

Upgraded the Advent Power and allowed for one more burst, a strength increasing aura and wider range (similar to a shockwave) but no increase in distance range.

Also updated the history, I like updating the history because it makes you feel like you're truly part of a significant story.

Yeah you cannot just modify your power like that. Powers can only be changed through an upgrade only. For now I am just going to assume that is your level 1 upgrade, and Approve this.

Once this thread is moved, you will be at level one. If you wish to level up again, submit a separate thread in the same format, with the new links and additions. Please try and follow the directions.